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Brilliant work.
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BIG LIKE
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Read MoreCall me a witch Isn’t that what society does When it is threatened By a girl It does not understand And does not try to Sure, it is couched in the Language of today “Inconsistent”, “young” “emotional”, “snarky” When was a dude ever called Snarky So go ahead And call me a...
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Read Morehalo stardust, keep peaking I'm in the elements come find me in the sunshinesalactious need in keeping with my desireyour blacbirds were the clouds my shadows covetedcoming and going with the darknessmy thoughts find you you're looking southand I...
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I live me a good storm. You took us through the darkened skies into the aftermath of gentle rain with this beautiful piece. Big smiles here
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hello beautiful Willow forgive my very late response thank you for such a lovely atmospheric comment…I’ve some sad manic days lately thus the tardy nature of this forgive me 💕
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Oh how a storm can sometimes so accurately mirror our feelings. You can feel it here.
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hello lovely green thank you I love your comments 💕
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Lovely to read your voice again. I can feel the wind and rain in this…
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hello lovely Broken one it is so good to see you thank you for being here and a beautiful comment 💕
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Beautiful work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate the love on this isn’t one an easy write to write but it was on my mind 💕💕
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Brenda this is quite beautiful.
The world talks about being different and individual but when you are they detest you.
Don’t bother about the world.Its a delusion mostly and is finite.
In the meantime, use your saphosexuality to seduce as many men as you like.
You’ve done it to me more than once with your writing….😜-
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good morning dearest Benny thank you graciously you made me smile today 💕
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We wear our life upon our looks. Some more obvious than others.
Chances are, we fall in love with someone after we have seen them physically and got beyond that, and into their psyche.
Confidence is the most attractive trait. Not arrogance or cockiness, but a quiet confidence that others will notice, and respect.
That is not looks. It’s a look within the eyes.
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hello dearest Stxian I was just recently in a situation to be surrounded by the upperclass again and I am reminded as I was when I was a child I didn’t fit with their perfect looks and pampered existence anyone could look good if there every whim was met and they didn’t have worry lines say about where there rent is coming from sometimes life throws so muvh at you your toenails not being perfectly manicured goes to the wayside thank you for such a lovely comment 💕
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Hoi hoi
The last two sentences are the cherry on the cake.
Could it be that there’s a portion of people who take/love you for what you are?
Don’t know if I’m right, but I love to think I am.
Yes, definitely.
Love your write…
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hello dearest Gus good morning there are those people who love me knowing me I was just around a bunch of assholes who care if you have money and it shows…thank you for the love here 💕
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I will never understand the obsession with “conventional” beauty. The models in magazines are airbrushed & one dimensional. You have depth, intelligence & spirit, Brenda. Those qualities glow, believe me 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow this was more of a critical look at where I am socially I guess it never it occurs to people it isn’t from stupidity it is because of my bad mental health so much of who I am doesn’t line up with conventional and upperclass standards thank you my dear friend for the love here 💕💕
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any fools with eyes can see the surface. but it’s the ones who actually look and can see its the weight you carried before that makes you unforgettable. excellent write.
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hello dearest poet I get weary for being judged for how I appear not my intelligence I have worry lines on my face worrying how I’m going to make it… I am schizo and it relegates me to poverty it was bad life choices it was my mental health that has made life so difficult for me thank you for the love here 💕
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Read Moreanxious lust pulsing through my fleshresist the feelings that ensueyour masculine indulges fantasies of us for me to considermy stoic pride, you are beautiful to mecome to me in daylight and hide yourself in mecome to me at midnight...
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Beautiful work. Powerful.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously for feeling me on this 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very passionate write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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helle dearest Damian forgive my very late response it’s just been sad here thank you for such a wonderful comment 💕
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There is a great rush present in your style.
The intensity is held throughout.
I enjoyed the thoughts flowing through this.
Regards
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hello dearest James I’m sorry it took me so long to get back to you just some hard days thank you most graciously for the lovely comment 💕
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No worries. Keep your fire burning
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Many times, the ending is only the beginning. Good poem!