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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Read MoreClose my eyes right before the impactStray bullets masked as fake applause Through all the pain my soul still intactFuck being perfect I embrace my flaws Takes more imagination than I possessTo pretend their intentions aren’t cruelInstead of knowing they made...
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You start out with the bullet. Damn
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know how to make an entrance or introduction in this case. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I agree with Fia. Very powerful write Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re welcome. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ya know, I would love to sit down one day with a cup of coffee, a cat & a fire just to read your entire collection. You never…not once…disappoint, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart such a cool and touching comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes life is like playing Russian Roulette. There’s truth in this.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It sometimes seems that way, I wish it wasn’t. Appreciate you.
Damian
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We play Russian Roulette with our lives everyday. Sad but true. Powerful piece my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunately, that appears to be the case. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWhat kills love is not time but the hunger unfed, the fire untended, the body that forgets how to say yes.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS and
Alexandria are now friends
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Read MoreHusband : There's only us two home for dinner tonight.Thought you could eat me for entree,I'll eat you for mains and for dessert...I'll leave that up to you. Wife: Sorry , I'm on a diet so will have to skip...
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This is so funny. There is no escape. lol
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Cleverly penned, Peter. A very witty write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow! You can never be too prepared, can you? The truth is, sex is really good for headaches.
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I’ve got a headache now…
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Put on the Marvin Gay. I’ll be right over
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian