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Bobbington posted in the group Cooking with Bobby
Hello to all!
My name is Bobbington and I love to cook. Today I will contribute a comfort breakfast I love to indulge in on the weekend.For reference of the drink, it is Pina colada mix w/ ice blended w/ grenadine
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A simple Start To This Group
McDonalds Breakfast
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, really dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Lovely piece Brenda. The words are marvelously woven to create a delicate, fragile piece of poetry. xo
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I wonder if that spider, doing what nature intended, ever said to himself – what a lovely day it is today?
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More