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    A Poem

      A Poem   oo0oo   Dream like, innuendo breathes deep moving slowly in a heart beat. And then you said, ‘Hi’. Reality flowed quickly from a dream.   What is a dream but a shadow roaming the mind. Illusive, like fire in a red dress dancing bare foot to music only you...

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    • This is sweet with a touch of trouble. “Red Dress” Nice

      • Hi Fia! Oh yes, she was trouble! Thank you for your kind words. And thank you for this Stars Rite poetry site.

    • Hi Curt,

      I really enjoyed this – it has such a dreamy, floating quality, I love how it moves from the soft, floating imagery of dreams into the sudden jolt of reality. “And then you said,” ‘Hi.’” The image of a dream as “fire in a red dress dancing barefoot” is striking and memorable. It feels like a brief, beautiful moment where fantasy and reality touch. Dreams inspire me. This piece resonates with me

      • Exactly RomaJ. Thank you. If I remember correctly, this dream woke me up. Unfortunately, there was no “reality” of her dancing in a red dress, barefoot or otherwise. Oh well. Dreams do inspire. It inspired this poem. Thanks again for your kind words and visit.
        -Curt

    • This is somewhat like Déjà vu to me. Something kind of jolts you, but in a way, you’ve felt it before.

      • To be honest, I was roaming through some of my notebooks and found this poem. So in one sense, yes, there was some Deja vu involved. But it was a dream I had back then (2009) that found its way on paper.

        Thank you, Tim, for your comment and perspective on this poem.
        -Curt

    • Beautifully penned, Curt. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you, Damian, for your wonderful comment, your visit, and your ‘welcome’ to SR. I am glad to be here. As I get more acclimated to the site, I will do a lot more reading. Reading some of your creations is near the top of the Read List.
      Thanks again,
      -Curt

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