hello dearest poet this makes me think of my husband he shifts like this I never know why but he does great write ❤️

Instinct is telling something is off.But not sure what it is. Nice piece

Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, 253. This write strikes a chord in me almost like I’ve met a similar monster. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This monster is unyielding and will not allow you to breathe. This part of the stanza is menacing and seems to want to feed off the fear. I sense it is afraid of the healing because if you do, then there is no need for the monster.

“I’m the only voice that’s been consistent
I’m the only one who’s stayed
and I’ll keep stayin
long after everyone else gets tired
of holdin you together”

The voice we hear loudest is always the monster in our head. And he’s an asshat. My first thought reading this was a protest…absolutely nothing about your writing is half-assed. It’s brutal and honest and that’s a helluva lot more than some can say. You are seen. Your monster is seen. Tell him that Truth sometime. When I say I’ve had these conversations myself, I’m not joking. Brutal, I tell ya

Powerfully penned, 253 & Fia. Excellent collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

Thank you for collaborating with this. It’s always fun seeing how a piece will turn out :))

This reads like a Christmas tree sacrifice.
Almost pegan-ish.
Cleverly orchestrated by the both of you:)

Great collaboration guys!