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mhm. thank you
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Well, if that wasn’t a potent steamy piece. I’m pretty sure the screen fogged over!
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good. wasn’t sure if way it was written would translate on screen. glad it had the right effect.
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Damn..
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I don’t think I’ve ever had one word response from you…
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very sensual with a great metaphoric vibe❤️
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thank you
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appreciate it
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Read Morecardboard pirate shipssailin thru sprinkler mistpopsicle red fingerprints on the wheelpaper towel tube telescope with a blue eye peerin thrubackyard turned oceanwaitin to be conquered tin foil helmet catchin sunlightswing set rockets rattlin loose boltsshoelace comets trailschalk treasure maps bleedin...
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![Profile picture of twofiftythree]()
thank you. I’m sorry that you relate.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, 253. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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hello dearest poet this write deeply shook me I was happiest in the neighborhood too thankfully my dad wasn’t home a lot and when he was coming home we hid praying we weren’t called from our hiding spots if he was angry we were easy targets and like you I wish to be invisible to the monsters in my day to day…here I can play superwoman…hugs ❤️
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appreciate you.
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Read Morewell he struts down the hallwaylike a vegas chandeliergold shoes squeakin egosayin power enters here says welcome to my ballroomsays it twice then once againkeeps spreadin out his armslike size alone makes men he says it’s absolutely massivesays leaders gotta swingmistakes...
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Lol. I like how you brought the seriousness and the humor together. The rhythm of the poem was good too. A-B-A-B
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thank you fia.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, 253. Into the book it belongs! Way to swing for the fences, this is excellent my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks Damian. big balls by AC/DC is what got this one started.
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hello dearest poet no one own anything on this earth no matter how much money or power they have… the earth herself will shelter who it chooses and evict the rest even the so called mighty great write ❤️
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true. appreciate you crimsin.
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Oh. My. God. This is brilliant! Mic drop! 🎤
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thanks willow. try not to go political often.
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