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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreripped from the mouth of sound a gapin holewhere hammer should break bone hands dropivory grindin under skinsilence echos where it used to strike scale shattersedges crackinbroken teeth in the dark chords crawl forwarddraggin themselvesthru blood and tone I slam the weight downagainagainas...
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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion
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appreciate it
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I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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thank you Rosie
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“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you Damian…always an easier write when involve piano.
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Read Morethe monster gets quieterwhen I let him listen to Bachmaybe redemption is justgivin the chaossomethin beautifulto kneel to
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That is a thought. Something to kneel to… this makes me think of what else would make it kneel? Interesting piece
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I love the powerful brevity here ❤️
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Read Morefists too quickmouth too loudanger always waitinjust behind my teeth I was the kinda boyfathers warn their daughters boutbut she never listened she looked at melike the noisewasn’t the whole story she saw the boywho wrote poemswho played classical musicwith bloodied knucklesand...
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This is a sweet poem. Make one think of the past.
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thank you fia
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Nicely put. Sometimes we take chances and hope for the best.
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appreciate it adelphina
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Beautifully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. There is always a person who can see through all the smoke and mirrors one might try to hide behind, I speak from experience of course. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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That second is pivotal. Defiantly an aww piece