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Read Morethe memory sits heavyin my chestdeeppatienta golden silencepoolin in my throatwashin awaythe jagged edgesof bein awakepromisin to drownthe staticin my skull
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facts
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Incredible fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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gonna take that as a compliment
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Now, it this does not show that Friday is here. I do not know what does. “slow.” ravenous. never satisfied” favorite line.
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yeah? that line felt good. thanks fia.
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I would bookmark the hell outta this if I could. Damn…I felt this in my DNA…
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damn. in your dna? got somethin right then. appreciate it.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Primal vibe to it my friend. Dare I say a touch of, Reznor?? Appreciate you.
Damian
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don’t you say it unless you fuckin mean. Reznor? damn. thank you.
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I meant it, brother! That’s the vibes I got. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moremaybe you made a mistake with memaybe I was justsome stubborn sharp edged choiceyou mistook for loveor hopeor somethin that could be saved I don’t make things easyI pull awaythen claw to stay closeI talk in circlesthen get pissed off...
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I find that when you think about how the other person should feel,,it is never truly what they are feeling. (Doubts) if that person should be with you can lead you to a negative space.
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I recognize that way I see it and she does us most likely not the same. thanks fia.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Assuming what someone else feels is dangerous territory, I know from experience. I was always trying to figure out what the other person in the relationship was thinking. Dating or friends, for as much as I might be right on an issue or two, I never captured the whole picture. Because we can’t know what they feel, it’s just an assumption at the end of the day. Strong write my friend, made me ponder. Appreciate you.
Damian
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nah. I agree with that. apprentice you.
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appreciate it
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I truly appreciate all of that. your insight.
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Read MoreI saidthe only way I’d ever slipwas if you wore itwhiskey poured across your chestdrippin lowpoolin at your hipsand here I amtongue to the spilllappin slowchasin that burndown your bodyI trace where it gatherstake it from the dipsbetween muscle...
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Now this is is tasty. Passion and whisky..I mean perfect.
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thank you fia
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Beautifully penned, Ambjr. The power addiction often holds over us. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks damian
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appreciate it adira
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Read Moreshe walks toward me the sway of her hips countin down seconds til surrender my throat tightens as her lips part in a silent invitationthat perfect shade of red that sadistic vibrant color the one that’s my favorite the...
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You brought heat, desire and torment in this. Yes that is the color Red.
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ain’t nothin like a red lipstick smile 🙂
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Passionately penned, Ambjr. Damn you was bringing heat with this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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write little heat from time to time. thank you
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gotta bring in little nasty sometimes. appreciate it.
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This memory is a tempest. Sounds sweet but deceiving. Nicely penned