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I appreciate your comment, Thomas, thanks.
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Excellent write, Tim. Amazing work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading it, Damian. Appreciate you too. 🙂
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Ahhh, Dear Tim,
Your Master Raconteur is showing his full glory in the soul of this exemplarily laid piece.
Especially impactful, how it’s recounted from the recollection of a fledgling lad by his grandfather’s side and grandmother’s caring hand, along with Labrador Brownie … sooo vividly exemplified, as though it all came form your own experience … and, within the boundless realm of your unique imagination, perhaps, it did.
Grammatically brilliant, a low sweep of my feather-crested chapeau to your golden pen, My Friend!
A work, no doubt, Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra, himself, would have envied.Thank you ever-so gratefully and sincerely, Syr Author, for the shared pleasure of your intricately-blessed, artistic skills! ⁓ Richard🖌
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No one can give a review like you can, Richard. I appreciate your comment. Thanks.
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Well, M’Astute Friend 🤓
With a writer’s mind that can’t seem to help speaking the length of its own thoughts and feelings, it’s no wonder my reviews drag on-n-on … LOL!
When but a callow lad, my mentor once told me he thinks I must have been vaccinated with a phonograph needle at birth.
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Tim this is an truly great memory piece and is filled with the wonder of a lad just beginning to understand the world around him. Your narrative is as superbly scribed as it is vivid and memorable. Truly a work of art that is articulated with excellent literary skills. Your prose gift shines here. This spoke to me of a coming of age piece with the young boy trying to make sense of the world and events around me. Your ability with description both the of the scene the the boy’s thoughts as he saw it were superb. Truly great prose.
John
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I appreciate your kind comment. John. Thank you.
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What an amazing and well-written story this is! You know how I love true tales from the past, and this one sure fits the bill. Your young thoughts are so familiar, and I know how it all had such an impact on you. Giants, knights and dragons surely would be expected in that cavernous place! I enjoyed this a lot.
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I really appreciate your comment, Sam. It’s all fiction. :)))
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Fiction? That’s even grander!
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Read all three.
I’m gobsmacked.
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Hmmm? I have been “gob” smacked many times. Lol. Thank for commenting.
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Read MoreSo I Move On I accept what has been doneto me although I find it hardto look in a mirror when Iknow that I am lying! Why me? I was born into a sadistic familyof incestuous perversions. Theywere abused and passed...
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Powerful and poignant.
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It’s part of a trilogy. Thanks for the comment.
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“The moon might be missing its sun too. Sometimes… people drift into shadows not because they want to leave—but because they don’t know how to stay visible. The night sky needs its sun too.”
-SomebodyWherever you are,I hope you are okay. I’ll always be here for you.
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Read Morewell I am brokebut that's nothing newI just don't know how to take the insultI care and acknowledge inequitysorry, I am a brown manso I know how it feels to lose a job over skin color I also know...
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To see the world and its inhabitants as they truly are and be able to accept them is being “woke” then I am too. Nice stream of consciousness.
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I will never be ashamed of supporting those who are just trying to live their lives. I mean I feel extra worried for trans people. When you have the vice president calling trans people deranged it’s mind blowing. Scary times.
Thanks for the read, much appreciated.
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Spitting fire, Nick. Into the book it belongs! A very powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I believe you can never lose when you fight with truth.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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!!!!🙌 So on point, my friend! That’s all I got for words here. You done said it all🙌!!!
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✋ such a great comment. Honestly I’m just happy to see there are people that see the ugliness that is happening.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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Hell yeah! 💥
Really, it’s gotta be the most lame-ass insult I’ve ever heard. If someone is calling people “woke”, does that mean they’re admitting that they’re asleep..? And… proud of it..? 😆 Geez.Love this write!
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Yeah, it is very stupid. And yet they keep saying it like they’re on to something. Literally they’re saying we shouldn’t think. It’s just as stupid as that movie don’t look up.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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