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Read MoreSummer Pleasure Hard and supple it lies in my hand Too big for my fingers to enclose Giving off a delicious aroma ofSun kissed strawberry fields andFiery spices at Oriental bazaars Expectantly, my naughty tongue Touches the tip, wandering around In...
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It’s always a pleasure to read your kind and supportive comments, dear Keith! Thank you! Xoxo
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Beautifully penned, Sappho. Great imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I appreciate you and your kind comment very much, dear Damien!
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Yeah, summer is truly a lovely season. Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Will!
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I often wish I were an ice cream cone and even more so after reading this. Well done. 🙂
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Read MoreThe fluttering in my stomachIgnites the pain in my chestAs a gunshot with silver pelletsFragments of the moontucked in my lungs, and in my heartSometimes grinding my liver and teethIn a fit of lunar epilepsySee: I am a flower...
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Powerfully penned, M.E. Into the book it belongs! Felt these words my friend, nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! Highly appreciated!
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Okay, it sounds like it may be time for you to have a little fun – get on a roller coaster with shorts and no underwear, maybe ask that girl out you met at the coffee shop. Hey, if I was next door… ya know. No burning entrails.
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Thank you, DK! Your comments work magic! “)
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If you are the magician, you have the power to bend and reshape this reality. You live the life of a poet. But what type of poet are you? Nice spill.
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Nah, I am not a magician. But I am a voulanteer to your show. You are the magician. Hahaha. Thank you for your kind comment! “)
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Wicked words that equal a kickass write. Great!
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Thank you, Brother! It means a lot “)
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Thank you, Adira! “)
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This is raw and honest, while still deliberate.
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Thank you, Surprise_Guest! I appreciate it! “)
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Powerful and raw. Great work.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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Read More"How long does she have?" asked the man behind the counter, stooping in his lab coat as he assessed the prescription."The doctor doesn't know. Perhaps a few weeks."The elderly gentleman empathetically smiled, his ocean blue eyes regarding his customer....
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I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!
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Thank you, M.E.! I like to give you the unexpected…
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Highly imaginative, Lady
Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
read when I was youngerGreat job DK
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Thanks, Naaj! I’m so glad you liked it. I was looking for something sweet and suspenseful. I accidentally ran into that internal Hawaiian love story when I was studying the flower and incorporated into the piece. It’s legitimate Hawaiian folklore, and I thought it was pretty cool.
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Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.
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Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!
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Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.
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Thank you, Thomas. I’m glad you liked it.
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Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re awesome, Damian! Thank you!
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Brilliantly written. Well executed. Sex, sex and more sex. This is some hot motherfucking shit!
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Well, hopefully more than just sex – but thank you! I’m definitely into sex!
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Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋
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Thank you, Daniel. My goal is to impress you and, well… excite you.
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So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!
xoxo
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A succulent poem Sappho. The wording, the image and the entry into summer makes this poem a delicious treat. GREAT!!