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Read MoreQuietly I ache to a reality I'll never wake. Though the glimmers of such soothes me, it is never enough to quell this heartache. Quietly I ache, to conceal wounds, I truly cannot. Though it was a natural forethought. Quietly I ache, tormenting aches of these...
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It speaks volumes to what I’m feeling now
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The words create a heaviness in this piece. Well said but filled with so much sorrow. Be well my friend.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the sorrow and depth of this piece my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The repeated phrases make such a punctuation point in this aching piece.
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I think the idea of death is both scary and peaceful to me. To finally have that moment of nothing sounds good. But nothing also is terrifying as it is unknown. What is after nothing? But yeah, peace one day.
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Amazing piece. DAMN Good Daniel. You’re a great storyteller!
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And this is only the first draft. I am considering making it into a full length novel.
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As always Damian, thank you!
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Read MoreI am merely a black silhouette in the room. Something plagued by the dreaded psychosis. I am a burnt-out shell of my summery youthful self. These days every moment has a wintry hallucination – flurries of racing thoughts rage in the lacerating gales...
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Violent, dark, horrific. My kind of poem. Nice work Danial.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. A chilling write my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreSummer Pleasure Hard and supple it lies in my hand Too big for my fingers to enclose Giving off a delicious aroma ofSun kissed strawberry fields andFiery spices at Oriental bazaars Expectantly, my naughty tongue Touches the tip, wandering around In...
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A succulent poem Sappho. The wording, the image and the entry into summer makes this poem a delicious treat. GREAT!!
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It’s always a pleasure to read your kind and supportive comments, dear Keith! Thank you! Xoxo
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Beautifully penned, Sappho. Great imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I appreciate you and your kind comment very much, dear Damien!
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Yeah, summer is truly a lovely season. Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Will!
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I often wish I were an ice cream cone and even more so after reading this. Well done. 🙂
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Read MoreThe fluttering in my stomachIgnites the pain in my chestAs a gunshot with silver pelletsFragments of the moontucked in my lungs, and in my heartSometimes grinding my liver and teethIn a fit of lunar epilepsySee: I am a flower...
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Powerfully penned, M.E. Into the book it belongs! Felt these words my friend, nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! Highly appreciated!
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Okay, it sounds like it may be time for you to have a little fun – get on a roller coaster with shorts and no underwear, maybe ask that girl out you met at the coffee shop. Hey, if I was next door… ya know. No burning entrails.
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Thank you, DK! Your comments work magic! “)
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If you are the magician, you have the power to bend and reshape this reality. You live the life of a poet. But what type of poet are you? Nice spill.
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Nah, I am not a magician. But I am a voulanteer to your show. You are the magician. Hahaha. Thank you for your kind comment! “)
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Wicked words that equal a kickass write. Great!
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Thank you, Brother! It means a lot “)
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Thank you, Adira! “)
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This is raw and honest, while still deliberate.
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Thank you, Surprise_Guest! I appreciate it! “)
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Powerful and raw. Great work.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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This is so sad. I feel this Daniel.