Ahavati (Tam)

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Damian DeadLove
2 months, 1 week ago

Cleverly penned, Wally. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Wally
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thank you Damian, always welcome your comments.
Thomas W. Case
2 months, 1 week ago

There’s a quiet reverence in this—like you’re circling something sacred without naming it.
That “there” feels like the pulse beneath memory and mind, the kind of presence that steadies a man when the noise falls away.
- Wally
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thank you Thomas. There are moments when feel something at higher conscious level that we feel drawn to it and yet give it that “quiet reverence” without going into detail.
  Hope all is well.

Damian DeadLove
2 months, 1 week ago

Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend, grabbed me by the heartstrings a bit. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Wally
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks Damian. I’ve always liked writing pieces that have plot twists or bigger reveals at the end. I often think of those who are passing and what their last thoughts may be.
Fia Naturie
2 months, 1 week ago

Wow this a touching piece. The memory of him building the house for her as he is passing away is sweet and sad
- Wally
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thank you Fia. I was trying to have this piece read more as a Civil War piece but felt that it’s obscurity in time could be left open to interpretation and connection to the reader.

Damian DeadLove
2 months, 1 week ago

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, incredible flow throughout especially that first stanza. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Crimsin
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
Benjamin Scraps
2 months, 1 week ago

Underrated word, ‘connive’. Very expressive. Like a baleful but seductive energy straight from the Abyss….
M.E
2 months, 1 week ago

This is not a poem. This is a black magic charming spell. 😀

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