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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Mundane Existence

Poetry

May 16, 2025

6

He goes to the same job everyday.He comes home to his wife every night.They rarely touch each other.Only on special occasions, like birthday's and July 4th.There not attracted to each other anymore.They don't make a fuss about it.A few...

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5 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Happens more than most would think. Powerfully penned, Keith. Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks Damian.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you Adira. Reality is painful for most. Appreciate the feedback!
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Can actually relate to this. Sadly. I feel my fiance and I no longer really love each other, not even any attraction exists. While I was reading your piece here, I felt my creative, poetic juices flowing and if I dont have any more purpose with her, then poetry and story writing will become my purpose in life. You write a simple piece, yet totally thought provoking. Bravo!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks man. I keep my writing simple, always. Many relationships go sour. It’s a very difficult thing to stay loyal and happy with that one person for the rest of your life. Stay creative Daniel. Wish you the best with your relationship.
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Senseless Violence

Short Stories

May 16, 2025

2

About 15 years ago I was watching the local news. One of the main stories was of a young man aged 20 being murdered. Not by a criminal, or his friends, but by the police.The boy who had mental...

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. This is a sad one my friend. Pulls at these old heartstrings. Unfortunately, you’re completely right this happens far too often. 9 shots 5 cops. Somebody shot more than once. Powerful message brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    It does. Many thanks for being the brave soul to read and comment.
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• 1 year, 3 months ago

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Thor_Azine wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

A Symphony

Poetry

May 16, 2025

5

A symphony of heart strings strummed echoed memories longing for the deep the curtain closed, but there shone a star blinding at first, I'm finding my way around The words in my head drummed funny how the day dreams creep the familiar now longing afar stands...

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4 Comments
- Drieks
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautiful ink…
  You made the words come alive.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Outstanding piece Thor. Nice to see you my friend.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Music and art are intertwined in this piece beautifully.;))
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Thor. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
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