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    Venus

    You rise in the twilight for I too bask in the dark. While I desire the burning day star, I thrive in the night.   You are ornamented with hues of Hell, Heaven, lust, and purity. I embellish the hues of an angel’s velvety...

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    • This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.

      John

    • Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!

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    Time

    You think I don't care I care too much You think I'm not here I'm here in the cuts When you reach out your hand I took it in mine I don't understand Why can't I take some time I won't be gone long I doubt you’ll even...

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    A Mess

    I say hihow are you? how's it going?just seems I'm the only onewhen did everyone get so impersonal?every conversation ends in awkward silenceam I brain dead or just different?special but not in a special kind of waycry baby, pull...

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    • No one wants to be the one to say hi first. Everyone thinks that the other person has a hidden agenda. This is an interesting outlook. Never wanted to be a boss. You know I talked with people in charge and some said that they felt the same way.

      • I try to tell myself that those thoughts are just delusions. But the mind does play tricks.

        Thanks for the read friend.

    • Powerfully penned, Nick. It’s a different world out there, dig this write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Seems like there’s a mass apathy sweeping the human race these days. Smile & get blank eyes. Or a frown. It’s rather disheartening…I find myself becoming more reclusive everyday. Not a good thing either, but at least alone explains the silence. Great reflection

      • Honestly I wish I could just lock myself in my house. I get so tried of people. It has become a hostile world.

        Thanks for the read friend.

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    A Girl So Ugly

    I once knew a girl so uglyshe had the boys eating out of her handselling them on views and likeslike a used car salesmanhad them believing she would be theirsbut she never truly cared I once knew a girl so...

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    Eye Candles

    Candles within your eyes, illuming my shadow.  Lonely in the dim I was, there is now a glow to follow. 

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    • This short and I can’t help to say aww. This is sweet

    • You know what I like about you, Daniel? You write and pour your heart out and couldn’t care less what others think or if you even get a nod or comment. You’re incredibly talented. Never stop being you.

      • It’s how I’ve been living… pretty much in the shadow for a long time now. I refuse to analyze too many of other poet’s work and I don’t like there being too much rigid structure on writing. I write how I feel and in a fluid, bending structure that allows me to complete whatever piece I want the way I want it delivered to the world.

        Thank you as always Alexandria,
        Daniel

    • Esoteric and beautiful. The image you painted here was filled with passion and beauty. Enjoyed this much.

      John

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