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Read MoreJolie stared... All night the stars suffocated in the moonlit sky. Gasping in the dawning sky as the first rays of the morning star tiptoed through the field. Her last chance was leaping out the window. The snow smothered...
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Read MoreMany years ago, as a child, I nearly escaped the jaws of hell. A hell that came veiled as an elder with a gentle face and soft, raspy voice. I remember her to this day as the...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write really pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMom never discussed the loss of her first baby or the events of that day much after that, maybe once or twice she brought it up to me later in life. Matter of fact now that I think about...
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Powerfully penned, Anna. Heartfelt storytelling my friend that comes through in your writes. Authentic emotion from your words pulls at the heartstrings of the reader, in this instance myself. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, I appreciate all your kind words and taking time out to read.
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just a quick note; Give some spacing (paragraphs) to this, please. It makes it much easier to follow for the reader.
I am curious by nature about the human condition/s, so I’m following your story along. Some line breaks, etc, would really serve this well.-
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Im sorry, my mind is just burnt out, im just dumping baggage not giving thought to structure, ill try to apply your suggestions. Thank you for your kind instruction, help is nice, but if I end up writing the same way my apologies in advance. 😂
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This is a good opening. Enjoyed the story.