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Read MoreFunny how I do feel like a pawn,before this now setting dawn.Each day over before it has begun,eclipsed by a forever waning sun. Just another creature of the night,sealed in tight within the write,treading water in all of this ink,struggling...
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This poem gives me a feeling that the writer is tired but will continue their plight on putting words on the page. Nice;))
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Powerfully penned, LDF. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIf the eyes are indeed the windows to the soul then where better to begin the harvest but here in a garden thousands of years from Eden where heathens huddle and scheme using inception to infiltrate our dreams ... ..and so began the fertilization by...
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“a carbon copy of creation’s
carbon based design
debased…defaced
vandalized
soon to erased
by those who would scandalize
the most basic of human interactions
replaced by something
unrecognizable
where hardly anything makes sense
these days simply because
it was meant to make sense
to someone else”Naaj, that last stanza drove it home my friend. Brilliantly penned, and you brought receipts throughout. A Masterpiece, brother. Into the book it belongs! Much respect. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big big thx, bro. This one brought back memories of when I wrote it.
Much respect
Naaj
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I’d like to bookmark this but I’m not sure if I did or not. Still navigating like a Luddite here lol. I see you’ve been keen to the dark doings for some time. I’m somewhat of a tinfoil hat veteran myself. Once you merge science with spirituality there is no going back, and nothing can ever be unseen. It takes fortitude…and it’s been taking more & more as the years fly. This resonates, thanks for the posting!
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You’re right about merging the spirit and science. That’s great insight. Much appreciation for your thoughts, Benjamin.
Much respect
Naaj
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An excellent observation on the dumbing down of America. People have become subservient to their phones. They don’t ask questions and they don’t think for themselves anymore. Tic Tock has poisoned so many young people alone. Interaction has been minimalized and your line about big brother is so true. We’re being manipulated for someone else’s benefit.
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You’re about Tik Tok. That’s a very dangerous site. Big thx for the support, Tim
Much appreciated.
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Read MoreIt remains so hard to then hedge,when you live here on the edge—live on the cusp of life and death,separated by only a single breath. Peering down from this height,within a dark and endless night—a never-ending sea of black ink,here,...
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Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
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Beautifully penned, LDF. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey LDF…
I was thinking about this piece…
I decided the punctuation tightens the write up…
Very nicely done…
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Read More''Contempt for money is a trick of the rich to keep the poor without it'' Micheal Corleone...The Godfather Pt 2 in the larger context the fuckery is indeed palpable watching the shameless movements of corporations extracting this...tax-exempting that profiting off of death war...racism...illnesses etc...etc...etc.........etc you think of it...they've...
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You wrapped society in a pretty bow. There are people who look for that type of payday. Nice spill
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Big thx for the support, Fia.
Naaj.
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Mic Drop. Into the book it belongs! Fucking incredible write Naaj, you good sir are spot on my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you rocked with this one, my brother. Sinking in deep thought, presuming the moral high ground, sometimes I have to catch myself and address my own hypocrisy.
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Read MoreI.A molten twilight ink dripsacross my most longing parchment—each word fragile as an emberglowing with untold tales. II.My quill trembles in my fingers,a poetic bird on the cusp of song,plumage dipped in a black riverof all my unwritten desires. III.At the...
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Tremendous work.
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Thanks so much…
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I like this format. Really good.
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Beautifully penned, LDF. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear S.
Oddly, this poem made me hopeful. I don’t even know why. Maybe this; I know you worked well and hard to make this poem and while you were doing it, you may have felt it relieve your sorrow and emptiness. Am I wrong? If I’m lucky, when I’m low and have the freedom to write, if I’m not put upon by some duty or demand and I find few words to write, it frees me a bit from my palatable discord. Is this it?
Thanks for writing this.
Jim