I love the flow and rhythm of your poems. This is beautiful

Beautifully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Creative and cool LDF…

Powerfully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely poetess I can relate to this great write 💕

Dear S.
Oddly, this poem made me hopeful. I don’t even know why. Maybe this; I know you worked well and hard to make this poem and while you were doing it, you may have felt it relieve your sorrow and emptiness. Am I wrong? If I’m lucky, when I’m low and have the freedom to write, if I’m not put upon by some duty or demand and I find few words to write, it frees me a bit from my palatable discord. Is this it?
Thanks for writing this.
Jim

This poem gives me a feeling that the writer is tired but will continue their plight on putting words on the page. Nice;))

Powerfully penned, LDF. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“a carbon copy of creation’s
carbon based design
debased…defaced
vandalized
soon to erased
by those who would scandalize
the most basic of human interactions
replaced by something
unrecognizable
where hardly anything makes sense
these days simply because
it was meant to make sense
to someone else”

Naaj, that last stanza drove it home my friend. Brilliantly penned, and you brought receipts throughout. A Masterpiece, brother. Into the book it belongs! Much respect. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’d like to bookmark this but I’m not sure if I did or not. Still navigating like a Luddite here lol. I see you’ve been keen to the dark doings for some time. I’m somewhat of a tinfoil hat veteran myself. Once you merge science with spirituality there is no going back, and nothing can ever be unseen. It takes fortitude…and it’s been taking more & more as the years fly. This resonates, thanks for the posting!

An excellent observation on the dumbing down of America. People have become subservient to their phones. They don’t ask questions and they don’t think for themselves anymore. Tic Tock has poisoned so many young people alone. Interaction has been minimalized and your line about big brother is so true. We’re being manipulated for someone else’s benefit.

You’re about Tik Tok. That’s a very dangerous site. Big thx for the support, Tim
Much appreciated.

Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.

Beautifully penned, LDF. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hey LDF…

I was thinking about this piece…

I decided the punctuation tightens the write up…

Very nicely done…