hello lovely Fia this is beautiful in its acceptance of this person behind the veil 💕

Hoi hoi
As long as you remember my name

I will always be content with just being.
Ahhhh…., the beauty of simplicity!
The cherry on the cake!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! What can I say? This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The one before the few or the many. Individuals, in the knowing, are complexities. Well worth the read 🌼

I don’t need anybody to remember my name, myself. As long as my words reached something in them in recognition. I’m happy to let others have the limelight 😊

Fantastic.

Your words display your humanity and some vulnerability. Yet, there’s also a warm heart behind all that beating.
Beautifully done, Fia.

Thank you, Hamid ❣️

Thank you, Adira ❤️

hello lovely Fia a very fiery passion powerful 💕

Oh damn…

Passionately penned, Fia. This write is fire my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I do this to women …
Then they burn for me
Wait
Listen
I may be at your door ….

The flames of that passionate fire are rising high in this one, Fia. Nice one.

Do you see me leaning in? This poem has made me a voyeur. Very nice, Fia, love it.

Intriguing…

I like the contrast you used in some verses. Dark thoughts indeed. Well done, Fia!

Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Adira;))

Fantatic!

G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️

Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.

You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).

“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”

Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🖌

Very captivating.

Thank you, Steven;))

hello beautiful Fia I’m sorry you’re feeling icky I hope yu feel better soon drink some green tea with a little tumeric it should help 💕great write

Thank you, Ravens:)

Get well…..words need to be written.

😷

Get well, Fia. Even when you’re sick, you write incredibly. Get so me rest my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fia very sorry for your ailment. But you sure wrote a fantastic poem about it. Digs deep and you really made it an engaging read. Hope this comment finds you feeling better.

John

Sickness is sometimes like love. You don’t know if your coming or going.