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Read MoreIn the sea of blue-green glass The cracks and slivers are camouflaged Beauty entices and invites you to touch Unaware minute cuts into unsuspecting skin When eyes focus You see the warped and corrupted shards Lessons learned and ingrained into the subconscious As blood drips and...
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Thank you, Tim;))
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I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏-
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Thank you, Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 🩷
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Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.-
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Yes it is. Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.Keep ‘em coming please…..
Warmest regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus (I will try to keep going:) )
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Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards JamesI love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides
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Thank you, James;))
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my Free verse
Do you hear the sun?
As the rays beat down on the ground,
It is subtle but poignant
It’s purpose is to burn.
The exquisite heat,
does not match the coolness in your eyesDo you smell the wind?
Multicolored in its complexity
Surrounds you,
Invades your very core.
It gives you life.
Then withdraws to take your b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
2. Poetic voice … how a poe…Read More-
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I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
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You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏
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Benjamin Scraps wrote a new post
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Read MoreCroaking sky, her clouded eyesspeak no more my wet rock homethunder-clap for pain & prizepeace within this patient stormfeathered crowning starry shinebrimstone shores our fleshy leakblazing calm through battered timemellowed from her salted peakcrooning zenith siren headsickle moon reaps...
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you’re so dark dearest Benjamin intiguing ❤️
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This poem is heavy. Dark and intriguing. Nice work.
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I imagine a grotto with the rocks are covered in with orange red seaweed. Then again, I see a grunion run when they come out of the sand, and the eyes look almost blue black
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Another great observation, Fia. You’re definitely on point about the water elements. This piece was partially inspired by watching crawdads slip in & out of their dark caves in a mountain stream.
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Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe Sun is speaking now in hungry, eldritch tongues... the stars are just right dust & smoke clearing monolith in the distance, pardon this stumbling crawling dawn, it breaks my heart & tools daily, yet I slumber soundly a fool past his...
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Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Benjamin I love your style I have chills❤️
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This is a beautiful compilation of imagery in this form
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To write a whole poem as haikus/senryus is outstanding! that’s a talent, I remember reading some poets composing few verses as haikus/senryus but not long as yours here, and most of your verses can stand alone as it is. I could feel here how nature is angry and speaking to now world where humans played with its rawness, the old genuine days against the new fake days, at the end the writer seemed to be fed up and welcoming the end if this end means the end of all madness, maybe then a new earth will be born.
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A life well lived…
Much respect
Naaj
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I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.