twofiftythree posted an update in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

twofiftythree · 2025-11-06T12:18:50-06:00

ok…not a fan of haikus apparently. they’re harder than I thought. wrote a whole bunch wrong and had to start again. then my favorite involved a pond. I saw SeaCat’s and thought damnit…let’s not both write ponds. ultimately I realized I’d rather write a thousand sonnets than a single haiku. but I definitely learned somethin. clouds file past the moon stars align without protest darkness signs its name

twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

• 5 months, 1 week ago

ok…not a fan of haikus apparently. they’re harder than I thought. wrote a whole bunch wrong and had to start again. then my favorite involved a pond. I saw SeaCat’s and thought damnit…let’s not both write ponds. ultimately I realized I’d rather write a thousand sonnets than a single haiku. but I definitely learned somethin.

clouds file past the moon
stars align without protest
darkness signs its name

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- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  5 months, 1 week ago
  
  LOL!
  Two ponds would be just fine, but I’m quite chuffed with this one, myself!
  Now, that’s a splendid Haiku, 253.
  Ditch “the” and replace it with something meaningful, like “gold moon” or some such and it’ll sparkle on the page