The shock of discovering you killed your own. That is a horrible way to find out. I like how you wove this tale.

One of our favorite pieces and movies and to put it in a different era the kids may read this, thank you Lady

This is an awesomely told tale my friend. You have the story tellers gift for taking an ancient story and breathing into it a fresh perspective that is so invigorating to read. You engage the reader with suspense and then that explosive ending. I too thought of Oedipus when that ending came. A worthy addition to the myth.

John

We really appreciate your reading and comment, much respect