A Taste of Freedom
The gulls are all
going crazy
both in the sky
and the recently
smart bomb
ploughed fields
and factories
that as yet
remain standing
behind my
old banked barn ..
There must be
something going
on back
there surely
to make them all
behave like
starving children ..
Each having
found their own
convoluted
route to freedom
and their
sudden release
from hungry ghettos ..











Powerfully penned, Neville. Another excellent write with many layers my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thanks again my friend .. Neville
Oh man this is dark. Freedom from this life. Nicely written I had to read it twice
then I am indeed doubly honoured .. many thanks my friend .. Neville
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
Many serious thank you’s Thomas .. so very muchly appreciated .. Neville
If freedom means to hurt others, act with no morals, not caring about anything or any creature, this is not freedom, this is greed and aggression. and this world is not free as many says, this world is locked with the human ego. true Freedom is at the heart, freed from the negative emotions, then the world will become free with love and harmony.
I like to think You have many of the same values as indeed I have maintained over many years .. stop, hit pause & autocorrect .. that should read I know we share similar beliefs about this that and so many things .. & I unashamedly thank You for each and every one of them .. Neville 🌻🌸💮🪷🌹🥀😎