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it is what it is ..

Defining Still

 

as patient and still

as the dark

shadows each cast

beneath the arc,

span and the reach

of outspread

sun bitterns wings ..

so perfectly

poised for the kill

and far more

patient, than any

would be

rooftop assassins

perched

up high, on some

invisible ledge

behind an invisible

screen ..

each posed with

their back to the sun

on a double

time killing spree day ..

 

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    1. I never thought about it before. But there’s the stillness of calm and there’s the stillness of predator watching prey. Took me somewhere I hadn’t expected!

    2. Ever watch a bird of prey, a vulture perhaps, or an owl, as it waits for the strike, its head bobs and moves side to side, almost like contemplating the angle of flight and how delicious the prey will taste. The balance of nature caught in that “double time killing spree”. Your poem Neville, is as sharp taloned as that shadow warrior, looking at its dinner.

      -Curt

    3. Still as a trigger finger in the dark, your hunter waits with the world holding its breath.
      There’s a cold patience here—the kind that knows the sun can light a kill as easily as a prayer.

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