Farewell sunset,
for I know the sun sets in regret,
unable to hide itself from infinite echoes
of space’s faceless silhouettes.
Fragments of infinities torn
in shifting gravities,
abandoned lights
blinking messages in every burning tick.
Phantom breaths
birthing sinless realities,
absolute innocence in darkest purity—
soul dust vibrating through the ghost called eternity.
Angels harmonize on Artemis radio static,
biding a response from the looming moon’s silence.
False reflections, wilting superblooms—
constellations of shadows.
Senseless hope sweeps its crater,
a forgotten home—stones frozen in decay.








This is good stuff. It’s interesting and holds my attention completely. The details paint the picture thoroughly.
Awesome write.
Thanks Styx, I appreciate your feedback. What does it make you feel?
an incomplete day
this is utterly fantastic with its beauty and substance ❤️
Thank you Crimsin! I hope it made you feel something, if anything… 🙂
Powerfully penned, thoughtsdie. Excellent write with lots of depth my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian