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for the first time

        words

              sworn

                       never to be spoken

 

s

   p

      i

        l

          l 

 

                  from desperate lips

what loss is there?

        compared

                          to freedom

                                         of hope

l i s t e n i n g

                   intently

as thoughts 

                      t

                         u

                             m

                                  b

                                      l

                                         e            

             

                                               out

 

enlightening

 

weight 

                  on shoulders

                                               lightening

 

 

                             at last!

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  1. Powerfully penned, Willow. Excellent write with a really different layout and delivery my friend. It worked brilliantly by the way it created a vibe. Magnificent work my friend really dig the approach used on this ink. Appreciate you.

    Damian

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