I. In Jade Relief
Within verdant stillness, it breathes—
exhalation of peace in stone.
Silence carves itself into serenity,
each line straightens to temporality.
Eyes half-closed to becoming,
he sees what cannot be unlearned:
the world forever shaping itself
around folded edges of release.
Calm is not absence but depth—
a translucence of unknowing,
where even the smallest fracture
radiates with acceptance.
In this eternity of cut jade,
time bows low before itself,
sees reflection as pure verity
cut from impurity of impermanence.
II. Origami of Jade
Folded breath of jaded dreams,
translucence shows patient glint.
Every crease prays invisibility,
each edge a pledge of true becoming.
Light forgets restraint on its face,
shadows bow along each seam—
nothing moves while in motion,
hums of stillness still resonate.
Time now sports smooth pleats,
holds shape in fluidity;
what was once so fluid
has learned to fold but not break.
Here flight is not escape, just form—
stone remembering to forget;
a frozen phoenix of silence,
its silent immolation smolders unseen.
III. Reflection in Stone
In mirrored calm, no face appears,
only shimmer of becoming.
Light rehearses itself across surface,
then vanishes into its own depth.
Stone absorbs memory of what it shows,
not as image but as pulse of breath.
Reflection is a breathing pattern—
what was seen continues unseen.
Time looks upon itself without eyes.
Even absence glows faintly at edges.
The world folds back into witness,
each gesture aware of being observed.
What remains is not identity
but awareness suspended in texture—
stone no longer hard,
light no longer certain.
IV. Rebirth of Silence
Ash cools where fire once spoke.
Air remembers its former heat
but does not name it.
There is language beyond completion.
No chisel hums now,
only echo of shaping—
soft vibration in hollow
where form once dwelled.
Phoenix no longer burns;
its ember is breath.
Stillness learns to move inward,
folding heat into transparency.
At last, even silence loosens hold.
Meaning dissolves like smoke into air.
The poem forgets it was written
only awareness remains








I can tell that trip had a deep impact on you. Love this 4-part piece of work.
I’m enthralled….I read these over and over, S. I love all of them, but #4 is my favorite. In four short stanzas you managed to create a complete story that had me transfixed.
Brava.
The titles themselves are phenomenal and I love the style. I’m trying to expand my writing, I’ll practice these. Thank you.
Okay, you earned a “Wow!”. this is very good. The second one is my favorite, because it seems like the peak of them all.
Even, the fourth reads like an epilogue, btw. Planned? A solid quartet of strong writing.
Awesome crafting of words!
Beautifully penned, S. Excellent collection of poems my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Libellule, this poem is so artfully crafted and an exquisite blend of light, artistry and form. There s gentle flow here that felt like reflections on the art so gently scribed I could feel what you saw in an emotional way. Truly great poetry.
John