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Longtime Baby

Been a long time since that ship had sailed
been a long time  
long time baby
i remember when i drank from your well
been a long time  
been a long time baby
the man i was now an empty shell
been a long time
a long time baby
you’re as beautiful now still as frail
been a long time
a long time baby
too long i’m sorry 

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    1. This has the feel of an old blues song—regret, distance, and a love that never quite stopped haunting the speaker. The repeated “been a long time” works like a slow heartbeat, making that final “too long I’m sorry” land hard.

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