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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
INK MY PEN
It’s your poetry
That I love
That makes you pretty
I simply think of…My ink sets on you
To find that passion
That I want to talk to …
Show me your fashionBlack and white
Add some red
I don’t want it so bright
Toast my Texas BreadA letter to a word
It’s not spelled right
Nothing I ever heard
I’m writing thi…Read More![]()
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![Profile picture of redzone]()
Your ink is fine / it tastes like wine / so much better than mine? Oh well, I tried. I enjoyed the read, thanks. -Curt
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Awww cute thank you for liking. Red Wine is always the best.
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places
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Thank you Willow. You are right its the nuances. <3
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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This is a very reflective piece.
I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.
I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.
This is a dark but incredible read. x
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Pitch
There is dark
And there is pitch
It’s funny how dark can feel comforting
And pitch is where the nightmares make a homeI see your silhouette in the dark
Envisioning warmth from lips
Sounds that roll like sweet butter toffee off the tongue
And I know there is only one thing left to doThen there is the pitch
Alone and n…Read More5 Comments-
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Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Navina;)
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Of course 🤗
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Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
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Thank you Hjx
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NAVINA joined the group
”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Amen, Brandon.
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
Thanks Damian!
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There’s a beautiful certainty in the way you wrote Grace. A presence that steadies, lifts, and stays. This piece moves with a kind of quiet strength.
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If Grace approves of Grace, then that makes my Friday! Thank you.
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
This feels almost like psalm or a benediction. Gently pointing out grace at every turn. Beautifully written
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Thank you Willow 🙂
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I love your ink. HJx