It sounds like blood is on the menu. Intense, I like it

Cleverly penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend, your title reads like a news headline. lol. Excellent work. Appreciate you, brother.

Damian

That’s raw writing! It weirdly reminded me somehow of Nietzsche’s gazing into the abyss. “)

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A powerful and disturbing writing dear friend! That I feel unsettled means that you hit the nail on the head.
In his comment, ME relates to Friedrich Nietzsche and his advice not to look too deeply into the abyss so that you won’t become a monster yourself. You suggest an alternative: you do look deeply into the abyss, light it up and make the monsters visible to your readers. Awareness is the first step on the road to transformation and integration. You did a great job here, Keith! Xoxo

Cleverly penned, Fia. Amazing story my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cool story. Nicely executed!

loved this

I really like this one. Nice.

I feel like I need to read this several times to really take it all in, but regardless it’s a very fun little mind bending read.

Thanks for reading such a bizarre poem.
I don’t really know what it means.
Maybe it’s meaningless.
Regards
James

hello dearest poet I love the symbolism of purple employed here being the color of passion 💕

It would be pleasing.

Even my “wishes” are therapeutic and geared for happiness and greater good. I have been medicated, institutionalized, in therapy and group. Writing helps. The rest is depressing.