It’s always an honor to know that someone reads your words and understands. I appreciated this so much and it was beautiful in its own right.

hello dearest Benny this is so incrediably beautiful thank you for seeing me and us poetesses I was having an anxious day and this improved it with its tenderness 💕

I’m honored!

Speechless…

So often we feel unheard & unseen. Men & women both. This touchd a place in me that needed prodding. Thank you for seeing us

Did not know sharks are older than Saturn’s rings. Figures, they are rulers of their domain. This is an interesting piece like the underwater theme. I feel that you are bringing attention to the destruction of the oceans. At least that is what I am getting from this,

hello dearest poet I love the way you wove the rhythm with the words it sounded like an old pirate… sharks terrify me I have had nightmares of being lost at sea swimming among them but I guess I should fear the land sharks more great write 💕

The flow of this…pardon the pun…is amazing. There’s calm & destruction found in the depths of the ocean. Definitely will be returning to read this again

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Enjoying freewill & preferring instruction, that is humility & love there. Whether it’s Him or him. This is strong, Brenda 🧡

hi Benny this is very good…my observations are on constant play my mind never quiets I only use tech to silence my mind somewhat it doesn’t work though…my nightmares are intense to say the least 💕

Thanks Crimsin…..I do get some respite. by meditation.Mornings are a bit shitty but like you ….just keep going.

Oh my….this was brilliant! I wasn’t sure where it was going until I got halfway through & recognized familiar territory. Yeah, watching the mind can be all-consuming, healing & hurting…all at the same time.