A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)

When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it

I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.

The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
I hope that there is success from your dilemma soon!

An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.

I digs this

Much respect

Naaj

Superb work.

Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.

Daniel

Echo the others
This is how erotica is written

Bravo !

I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.

Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully

Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!

” The years had left some tangled vines—
But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”

Mic drop.

Much respect

Naaj