The layout is perfect for the rhythm to shine here.
Sometimes the thoughts we have turn into fiery poems, and often those thoughts burn up before they get to the page.
WE hope to be able to scrape up some of the embers and still put a piece on the page.
“here, here and especially here.”
j.

This was a fun read. I was told you get more philosophical when smoking. Instead, you get the brain burn. Nice

Powerfully penned. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

“I already forgotten your name. my heart has not forgotten you.” That is an Aww line. Nice

I don’t know but I do know how you’ve always managed to make me want to eat your words so I could digest a few and muchly increase my own writing!! I know: tis an impossibility. Unless a small bribe would help!

Laughing because I’ve oft wondered about that word or – is it a perversion!

By the way, we’re not going to argue about who’s the best, sir.. I, a mere woman, wouldn’t dare! More than probably.. .. .. ..

Fantastic work. Great to see you here, my friend.

Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.

Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
j.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…

Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability

I wonder what exactly the reason for that is…
I think politically…and all those afraid to stand up against the King.
j.

There are so many ways to take this…I like when a statement makes you think.

It seems you are indeed write sir .. and for wot it might be worth, I’ve thinked the same thing myself .. & often .. Neville