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![Profile picture of Sam Dickens]()
I really am touched by this, probably because your childhood sounds a bit like my own. How marvelous it would be if we could all be born into solid, loving families, but alas–not in this world does it happen. Still, despite the lousy hand that life often deals, beautiful flowers may bloom from the poorest soil. I played in leaves, too… and mud puddles.
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It’s a heart tugging piece, the harsh realities of the world where adults strip away the innocence of the young.
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Thanks Wally.
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Read MoreGhost ShipBy FlatDaddyI found a shipA mighty thing it wasA massive mast that touched the skyEvery oaken plank self carved Rigging unspoiled coiled upon the deck, untrodden, helm untouched, Yet, curious, every sail was made from...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I like the breaks of “and yet” This is great theme for this month, I enjoyed this.
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Thanks, Fia. I am so glad you like the line breaks. I feel that, with certain writes, visual presentation can be important to how the piece is perceived. This is one of those.
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I caught the curse vibe in this.
It slowly built up like a possession of his mind and actions
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Why, thank you so much! I don’t believe we’ve met, so I would like to return the favor. Is there anything of yours in particular you are most proud of? Feel free to message me, or answer here.
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This is a right good salty tale, especially so since it comes from an Air Force dude. (Makes me a bit jealous, it does) Never see the shore again? I know the feeling, but here’s a tip–if you look to that fluid horizon at night, you will often see tiny lights.
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I thank you, Sam, and yes, I have seen those lights, wondered briefly what they were, a fleeting thought — but did they notice?
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Rock on, Love this crimsin
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
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Fantastic!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
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I love the rock god!!!
So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
Cheers to the darkness!-
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hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
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I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
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hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
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hi dearest Keith forgive me for missing your comment thank you my friend ❤️
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Really intense images.
I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.I both admire and fear witches.
Regards James
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
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A wonderful write Crimsin. I hope you have a spectacular day this day.
Bat
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hello dearest Bat thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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The moments like this are like balloons in the heart. Beautifully buoyant. This is what life should look like as a child…