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Read More1He who walks with his mind in his head.Though he don't know it.He's already dead.2Everybody's talks these days.But nobody listens.Not even to themselves.3Somedays I wish the earth were flat,so I could walk right over the edge.Instead it's a sphere,a...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend, your thoughts here make me ponder. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian…..some thoughts need to be shared with folks who might understand…..it’s hard to find anyone who wants to consider things that aren’t seen on social media.
Fortunately lots of people on here,yourself included, appreciate my musings.
I’m a minor key sorta guy.
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Read MoreIn the sea of blue-green glass The cracks and slivers are camouflaged Beauty entices and invites you to touch Unaware minute cuts into unsuspecting skin When eyes focus You see the warped and corrupted shards Lessons learned and ingrained into the subconscious As blood drips and...
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I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏-
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Thank you, Peter;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 🩷
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Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.-
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Yes it is. Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.Keep ‘em coming please…..
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Thank you, Gus (I will try to keep going:) )
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Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards JamesI love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides
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Thank you, James;))
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
for sake of the lesson I added punctuation…don’t get attached.
gravity slip
I stumble thru a world
that’s bent slightly outa focus
as if it were half dream,
half burn.
heat risin off my skin in waves
like quiet embers tryin
to decide if I’m worth ignitin.every breath feels wrong,
every step lands heavy,
gravity clawin up my s…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Sheer brilliance, Syr 253
You’ve mastered the heatbeat techniques of Free Verse poetry: Imagery, deeply gripping emotion, metaphor, spot-on line-breaks, seamless enjambment, syntax; and, except for the distraction of missing “g’s”, your diction and spellbinding flow would be irresistibly captivating to the senses.
Also, your well-placed…Read More
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Paula Jobi wrote a new post
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I’m sorry to hear that Paula. I hope you get well soon. Best of luck.
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i hope it heals soon ❤️
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get well soon Paula….we miss your postings 💋
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I hope you feel better.
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Read Moremorose feelings entertainmy sexuality tied to darknessstunningly beautiful, captivating my soulseducing my flesh, lust flashes and I cavea seduction of spiritquietly amusing me, while my thoughts are abusedin the thick of things I moantasting the aether and the need...
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Wonderfully worshipable
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hello dearest Jim good evening thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Very haunting and pure shaking.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undercurrents my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Those are some interesting thoughts. Round and round we go. you are right.