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Read MoreI feel hotwhen the room is coldI'm still youngso why do I feel so old?my feet hurtit's hard to walkmy stomach achesI feel like I'm about to barfmy head is always killing meand my vision's blurredthe house is a...
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Excellent write my friend. It’s not fun getting old that’s for sure. Amazing flow and wordplay brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That state of overwhelmed exhaustion seems to be running rampant these days. Everyone I know is always tired and I stopped checking news…it’s so bad these days, they bring it to you. And yeah…getting old sure ain’t for sissies!
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Read Moremy somberest feelings find youwith deep affection I greettouching your depths so you will know mewading in the deep so you would see the woman before youcollecting shadows from whispersthen presenting them to you as giftssecrets of my heart...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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Sensual and somewhat sad. Well done.
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good day to you dearest Jim thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your understanding of the nuances here ❤️
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🙏💖
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Read MoreA beautiful Angel crying tears of stars Eyes the color of a starless night, stretched afar To look at her weeping and not feel a tugging at your heart Is to not know the force that holds the moon and earth apart I’m...
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hello dearest Me this is very clever and beautifully written and full of passion I really enjoyed it sigh to not have her accept your love after all that she would be a fool great write ❤️
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Everything that the flesh craves is not to be, the spirit and the universe must be in synch. Thanks Lady
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You went to battle for her? Sweet
Favorite line
Me warring with Mars and Apollo, showing her who really cares-
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Would you not battle for love, even unrequited love. Thanks Lady
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Read MoreYou slippedaway from me,like the robins andcherry blossoms whenspring ends,and the fractured nightsof winter come.I will search themidnight alleys, and themountains of Chile.I will listen foryour sweet laughter.I long to taste yourhoneysuckle lips, andhear your heartbeat.If I never find...
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Dude you write very clear with a natural tint, not slutty. Although you get your point across through nature and travel makes it sizzle. Tight
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Beautifully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Great work. It flows and hits hard.
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I appreciate it.
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I wonder how many lost leaves are drifting on vagabond winds. This is beautiful and aching and hopeful all rolled in one perfect poem
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Thank you, Willow
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Read MoreCongratulations to everyone. Thank you for your contributions to Stars Rite.Here are the links to the winners’ poems – Stars Rite
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Thanks for the info, Fia. And Congratulations to all the winners and runner ups. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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These are some excellent pieces of work. Thank you for commenting.
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I want to say everything will become better. Being that bone aching tired, that even the doctor tells you that you are ok is relatable.
Baby steps to finding a way to feel ok.
Very open poem.