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    starshine

    the moon you dance toothe stars you weep fora cosmos of facesbut one starstruck angel captivatedserenity in a smileethereal qualities, summer sunshinebut the sun can burnand you learned beauty concealsdirty little secretslies of omissionthe flocks of admires you have...

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    crave

    synthetic love patheticfeelings made of plasticrealistically inclined what do you know about fantasyconnecting with your depthssoul of souls realizing loveit is with deep affection I talk to youfaulty need to pleaseassaulting my pridedisaterous beauty inside desire's whimblame the dreamsmy...

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  • hopin to receive partial credit for late assignments…

    swore under oath

    rationality
    face down hands cuffed to my tongue
    heart screams alibi

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    • Love it, Dru ⭐

      Excellent, in every sense of the word: counts, directives, and intent in following in the spirit that one of the truly tangible facets of what the Senryu is meant to convey.

      For me, your Senryu literally strives to express needed fervor for acceptance and the strife to be trusted and believed-in, even though the opposite may appear…Read More

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    Point of No-Return (Collaboration with Duhsjaak )

    Point of No-Return Like pearls your tears glisten on the leavesA masterpiece of nature's magicSo marvelous and yet so tragicBecause it was us who caused your grief  We live as if there was no tomorrowGlobal warming and droughts we acceptAs progress'...

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    • This is one amazing collaboration. WOW! The lyrics, music and image are stellar. Great work here!

    • Fabulous work yoy two very gifted artists. 🙏

    • @visions of Insanity
      Also on behalf of Sappho, I would like to thank you for listening.
      The lyrics are about something we both care deeply about. And she was the one to write this inspiring poem. And artwork of course.

      Thank you so much for your very fine compliments. They go a long way!

      Kind regards, Sappho and Gus

    • I said it before. Wonderful collaboration ❤️

    • Powerful penned, Elke and Gus. Excellent collaboration you two. Great lyrics, Elke and excellent music, Gus. Your guitar tone has a little Neil Young vibe going on. Top notch both of you. Appreciate you, both.

      Damian

    • I bow most reverently to Sappho ‘n Gus 🙏

      Stunningly beautiful, You Two, in every sense of the word.
      Artwork choice, title, and the Envelope Form in its abba rhyme-scheme (with spot-on and soft rhymes), work perfectly together, just as writing and musical skills came together in rendering this lovely, impacting virtual masterpiece in homage to Mother Earth’s ever dwindling beauty and life sustaining wonders.

      Simply, an enthralling co-write … love it deeply!
      Thank you both! ⁓ Richard🖌

      Nits:
      (Check V1-L3, “get” may have been meant as “yet”. Final stanza, L1, should “plead” be “plea”?) 🤓

      • I bow with gratitude to you, dear Richard! A breathtaking comment and the appreciation of a writer like you means a world to me!
        I have gratefully implemented your kind suggestions for improvement. As English is not my mother tongue I appreciate this all the more! 🙏

    • I’ve written a few from this vein myself and no doubt we’ll write many more, trying to get people to pay attention. The both of you did an amazing job on this. 🙌

      • There is a lot of work to be done to raise awareness of nature’s uniqueness and to call for its protection. But we won’t give up!
        Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my dear fellow campaigner, for your wonderful comment!

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    The Shoes

    I likemy shoes; they arethe only pairI have.I've walked miles inthem.They havegot me around for years.My shoes arefalling apart.They should havequit on me a longtime ago.Strangely enough,people complimentme on them.They don't seethat the soles areworn thin, or that theysmell...

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