Where Rivers Wander

Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

A Harp Upon My madness

Poetry

April 18, 2025

6

The bedlam on me, I weep notes of despair They were broken pieces of my sacredness thrumming the harp upon my soul of madness My heart strings out of tune with the other beings sang a melody of melancholy and insanity visions blur, and...

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5 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Brenda. A very powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love on this write 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you graciously lovely Patricia for a beautiful comment 💕
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautiful as always, Brenda. Angelic and heavenly.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Daniel I appreciate you 💕
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Masochism's Lust

Poetry, Romance

April 18, 2025

8

exalting the feeling, I let it ridelust-fueled and ready to touch your mindseduction of the intellectRomancing your darker sideWhere you groom your Vixenletting her into your worldWith Red Light District visionsand pornographic wisdomthere is nothing wrong with being a...

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7 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  So incredibly hot & sexy!! WOW!
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith you are appreciated 💕
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brenda
  
  I like your work but it doesn’t always play nicely on my phone….maybe the font needs to be slightly smaller…just saying.
  💋
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    I’ve been just doing the preformatted option otherwise my stanzas aren’t spaced right sorry about that dearest Benny thank for letting me know 💕
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Brenda….you fixed the formatting…thank you for doing that.
    Now I can read your work properly….very sexy sone if it
    - Crimsin
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      💕thank you Benny…
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you graciously lovely poetess 😊💕
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

entranced

Poetry, Romance

April 18, 2025

10

The vibe you put out is entrancingRomancing the notion of weThere is no us to speak ofYet your energy says there could bea deep intellectI rest in the layered shadows of your creationand dream of what is thereTaking my...

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9 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Lovely Brenda…Perfect piece of exquisite romance. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith I appreciate you 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you most graciously lovely poetess 💕
- Average Joe
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  A harmless pass time or a dangerous thing to dream in the thoughts and words of another? Nice capture, Brenda. 🌼
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hello dearest Joe I think it depends on who you are mine is in the moment daydreaming thank you for your thoughts 💕
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  That aching want. I know it well. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you dearest DC I appreciate you 💕
- RPM
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Great piece!
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 1 month ago
    
    thank you graciously RPM 🙂
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

D Minor

Poetry

April 17, 2025

17

Candlelight flickers against a dark ceiling Another tequila shot with a beer backer Writing blunt words forecasting a feeling This ink that stains the page like lacquer Miserable vibes eating from the inside out Spiraling deeper into famine and...

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13 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  D minor is like most minor chords a wee bit sad.I like diminished chords which kind of fit between sadness and happiness.
  
  Good write dude.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve always liked D minor, Neil Young wrote quite a few. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Angels
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is something different from what I have been reading here. I like it.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angels. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello dearest Damian that refrain about not knowing whose real and being an opening for the headliner really struck my I could feel the emotion there this is powerful 💕
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked those lines a lot as well. I always have lines in writes, that I like a lot. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tremendous work, my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I can hold my own, and am always exposing truth. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write. Thank you for the compliment. Really means a lot to me. I love your take my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Nothing wrong with opening, you played that’s what matters. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Cool piece Damian. Love the D minor chord.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Would You?

Poetry

April 17, 2025

10

Would you take my handTake a chanceTo fall inLoveWould you spend a momentTo consider thatI may beYoursWould this be your only chanceTo have whatWas meantEternally

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10 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  In a heartbeat…
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Peter
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Seductive read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautiful work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas;))
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Have to take leaps to get that loving devotion. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Nick😊
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  What a lovely offer within the stanzas of this poem. Everlasting love. Romance poems are the best poems! Especially when there’s a sense of longing for someone who isn’t yours yet. Sweet write, Fia, as always.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you , Daniel 😊
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