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Read MoreBeyond the breakers where the tides never reach, we watched a small child flying two kites and you said ‘that could be me and you’ Born still, midwife's mouth turned to scissors delivering the cruellest cut Sometimes, the sun rises in my bedroom at midnight the TV...
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Read MoreI never asked to shoulder your weightBut here I amWith every burden I takeYou don’t give a damnYou assume I don't feelBecause you read what I wroteYou assume I am healedYou're wrong. I stand here brokeI strive every day to...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Could feel these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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There is true and honest pain here, so palpable I can almost touch it.
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Thank you Detritus ☺️
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A powerful piece written with heart blood. An empath can feel what is Hidden behind the words. Vibrations speak louder and clearer than words. Great work Fia!
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Thank you, Sappho, appreciate that:))
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One of the hardest things is trying to help and being pushed away.
Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick;))
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So true. I can write it down…to give me release for the moment at hand. But somethings live on forever. You can’t delete it. I wish I could. Oh no! Another thought coming on!!!
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I just wrote Edit My Life after writing my comment.
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Haha you were inspired? cool
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It seems that a lot of times, when I comment on someone’s work, the way I relate turns into my own next submission.
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It happens to me sometimes. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks
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I feel this. The weight of another persons sorrow. A moving piece.
Kind regards
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Thank you, James;))
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Be needed, never need. The door never swings the same both ways. Tight
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Thank you Me.
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Read Moresound check and roll filmevery moment captured in memoryblack and white sorrow caught in stillifeamazing journey through the hurtblue tears streak a child's facemomma's gone and daddy became my heroyou know he tried so hard to protect me from...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words pulled on these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply on this I appreciate you 💕
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Your words have a way of slicing below the surface, to the core. The last two lines remind me of the lyrics, “ it’s better to burn out than it is to rust”. Keep shining, my friend.
I sincerely hope to meet you on the other side!
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thank you graciously dearest Gus for feeling me so deeply it’s appreciated 💕
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Read MoreOn the edge of my waking dreams lain as solitary skeleton under double-duvet shroud, only my mind knows who I groped in the night no room for ghosts or memories of teenage promises, |f you ride the subway m twilight to sun rise make sure...
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Interesting how you go to one time period to the other.
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Fia, thank you.
H. your presence here is a pleasure to the poetry world. I simply genuflect at your kind and caring soul x
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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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