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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you felt the magic❤
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First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously yeah I meant summon…lol ❤️
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Powerful work. You nailed it.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love the feel of this. Reminds me of this song by S&G…..https://video.search.yahoo.com/search/video?fr=mcafee&p=poem+on+the+underground+simon+and+garfunkel&type=E210US752G0#id=2&vid=6df47f303922526d0faa70e1eaeed172&action=click
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Thank you J. Flattered. Song is universal.
Work this out. I’m Welsh first, British second and my beautiful Dad was English. We’re a complicated bunch across the Atlantic. I stand against the heinous Empire and her jingoistic bs. Other than that, I’m very easy going. Lol. This song / anthem is central to my poetic heart. Subtitles are provided!
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Thank you for sharing your song.
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This poem is beautifully vivid and cinematic. I love how you blend the quiet of the night, the train platform, and motion with personal reflection. The imagery of film and landscape creates a strong, lingering atmosphere – really well done.
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Thank you – or ‘Diolch’ as some say in my homeland. I’m just a metaphor whore really, who finds catharsis on the release of life onto keyboard.
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you are a very passionate lover I can tell I’m telling you ths as I blush I know I’ve known you for years ❤️
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Yes, I have partnered up with Stars Rite.
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Spooky and spellbinding, crimsin. I like it. You capture the magic within the spell. 🙂