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Read More“I don't feel pain, I don't feel alive, yet no angels in the bright moonshine.” The lady of sorrow confided to herself aloud in a whisper. One so delicate, it could vanish like flying dust should she be loud. But she was standing stoically at...
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
The opening lines set a fragile, haunting mood that carries through the poem beautifully.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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I love the warning you give in this. Giving them perfect opportunity to understand what will happen.
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hlello beautiful Fia I actually cringe when they do me dirty because even though I don’t wish it retribution is coming… thank you for feeling this vibe I kind of felt bad for writing it it’s usually keep to myself ❤️
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Dear B,
You said it! This one cuts right to the core. Some days I want to wear a tee shirt that says don’t test me. Just don’t.
I even liked the font. Like the write it’s direct and unapologetic. Great piece. H🌷-
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hello beautiful Honoria thank you graciously I kind of felt uncomfortable with this one I don’t know why… I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️
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Chère C.,
As in:
I see small lines in your face.
They are beautiful.
I had to wait an awful long time for them.
And now they are Here, I won’t let you go…
And I would cup your face in my hands.
Yes, something like this, for sure.
Warm regards, Gus-
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hello dearest Gus what a lovely comment you are very sweet ❤️
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Great write but not as great as the picture of a beautiful woman.I don’t know if it’s you in the picture or not but there is something seriously attractive about her.
It’s beauty that goes deeper than skin,wisdom that goes deeper than words,scar tissue that colours the soul.
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hello dearest Benny no it is not me just an example of a beautiful older lady…lines and all my feelings got hurt that’s what this write was about I think people should take in all of you to see your beauty… not just the superficial…thank you for the love here ❤️
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A deep, heartfelt poem Brenda. Well said..xo
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously dear friend ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Age has been a humbling experience for me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Love the layers in this powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I was listening to a song called Lilith by Peter Grundy when I wrote this ❤️
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Pretty cool, Daniel. I like the visions that it creates easily for the reader. With an artistic flair of course.