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Read Moreacning love, blood spilled, emotions poolmy vulnerability exploited, makes me feel unlovedpeople are cruel I don't carebut when the one I love joins in I dietrust broken and crytoo different, I'm unloveable I guessstill hope plagues metelling me I...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Words are weapons and writers know how to use them, showing restraint takes self discipline. Especially against those who provoke us. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can absolutely relate to your poem, dear Crimsin. The strong wish not to hurt anybody makes sensitive people think that they have caused a conflict and are simply not lovable. Never forget that your loving heart and the power of your words are a most effective weapon and armor. Great work!
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An eye for an eye brings no satisfaction, the loss still exist and nothing can replace it. Tight
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Read MoreThe Shortest Distance Between Me and You is Together To write our cathedral we need a fountain pen bursting ink up our neck falling down as JFK tears across shoulder cloisters Swinging ropes of light shard resuscitate the gallows fallen. The broken patterns of sun set on nave floor, did anyone ask Lazarus if he wished...
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The title got me. The way you wove the bible in this but end it with the drink being labeled ‘What Price Salvation?’ is a damn moment. Good read
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Thank you. Seemingly, all we (as a world society) have left is salvation.
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This reminds me of the late 60s – early eighties writers. Yes, I’ve read that far back.LOL. My dad loved the old classics, while my sister came to poetry during the 70s. So I saw a great many styles and such.
Almost goes with LSD, this. Seriously! I don’t condone illegal drugs, ahem, yet in moderation many ideas have sprouted for many many writers.
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you are always too kind Mark.
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Brilliantly penned, Ghosteen. This is truly an amazing write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I appreciate your kind words Damian.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
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SESSION NINE
“LA KADUTA”
Wednesday, January 7th, 2026~———————————•§•———————————~
The La Kaduta is a short, quick, fun form to compose in.
It can be about anything, leaving one’s creative side
completely open to its freewheeling whimsies.La Kaduta
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Read MoreQuestions are a never ending spiral Searching for answers can get crazy Evil thoughts pulse until it goes viral Tired ideas has made the vision hazy Masks conceal the cruelest intentions Orchestrated fear designed to control Conflict feeds all these rising tensions It’s systemic damage that...
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“Masks conceal the cruelest intentions
Orchestrated fear designed to control”
Wow! This is a powerful statement that holds much truth! You just have to listen carefully to politicians. They tell you everything they intent to do, hidden between distracting words.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Two of my favorite lines as well. Exactly, they tell a lot these days. It’s all hidden in plain sight. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Not only true enough but my word yours here look so pretty sitting on their very own page .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well you know how to make a person feel appreciated. Thanks to you kind sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Phenomenal piece Damian. Makes ya think. Powerful write my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m always trying to evoke thought brother. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Okay, Prophet, you did it again. They only wear the mask long enough to lull the sheep. The wolves are out in force now, no masks. And you nailed this one like a jackhammer of Truth. I really wish you weren’t so deadly accurate…but here we are. That vault of yours must be packed with treasure, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Believe me I wish I wasn’t accurate. The wolves are taking everything that’s not nailed down. Including those boots we’re supposed to pull ourselves up with, we’re essentially strapless. lol. “Jackhammer of Truth” sounds like a possible song or album name. There are a couple of gems in there from time to time. I agree though the masks have been discarded. Always enjoy your commentary, sorry I tend to get you riled you up so often. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight, relentless lines. This feels like a pressure chamber where thought turns toxic and power hides behind masks. I like how the poem doesn’t over-explain—just lets the spiral speak for itself. Dark, current, and uncomfortably true.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m a believer of letting the reader fill in the gaps with their thoughts and where the write takes them. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice! Tightly done yet with a bullseye message. The rhymes are perfect, too. Excellent write Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You were ahead of your time, Damian. This applies today as if it was written yesterday. Great poem!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morecrazy is a perspective and I've held it for most of my lifeabandoned at three my sharp little mind saw and remembers the precursorspeople always have a tell when their about to break your heartthe night the cops came...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. It’s amazing how the body reacts when our minds are being overwhelmed. Living with lasting scars isn’t always easy my friend. Very heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for your understanding comment ❤️
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I can feel this one my friend. Strong write with all the colors and detail you’re so amazing at. Great piece Brenda.xo
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You are such a strong woman, Brenda. Many don’t hesitate to lash out and slash those wronging them. But you know the power of words. 🧡