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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Read Moretwinning knots of expression, winding themselves together on the atmospheresouls of no regard, gifting each other passiondeeply reaching into the wealth of the heartfinding thereselves in one anothers eyesfruition of desire long repressedcomes slowly but with a fierce strengthoddly...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here ❤️
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I love the way you put this story together. A love intertwined.
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hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you graciously for such a lovely comment ❤️
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Read MoreTruth shows up, walking through clover thick enough to stain my cuffs. It never learned my name. The air feels like too much, sweet and careless, stuffed with honeysuckle and soft light. My heart can’t hold it all, like I’ve won the lottery. Death walks beside me, slow, patient, hands in...
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This is no other way. That is so true you need to keep going forward while the euphoric feeling is there.
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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“Death walks beside me,
slow, patient,
hands in pockets,
whistling something,
like it’s got nowhere better to be.”Beautifully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Really dig the stanza above but it was all amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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Great work, full of fire and grit.
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Thank you.
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The way you describe death walking beside you with his hands in his pockets, like he’s not worried because his time will come as it always does in time and he’ll be there for it…all wrapped up between the moments of gorgeous nature unfolding around you…this is a masterpiece! Also, there is a distinct feeling of tiny death found in witnessing something so incredibly awe-inspiring beautiful. Brilliant
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You are fantastic. Thank you.
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for embracing me on this dark write ❤️
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This is darkly charged and unapologetic, leaning hard into seduction and danger without blinking. I like how the poem owns its fascination with shadow, letting desire and menace speak in the same breath.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously I love your comment ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
On DUP my nom de plume was Jilted Johnny.
Not practical, because on SoundCloud the seemed to be somebody with the same name.
I like it that you use Jilted in this very beautiful new poem of yours.Love it a lot. The artwork too.
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hi dearest Gus you honor me with your presence thank you my friend and jilted I can’t see it I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian