I cannot imagine the pain and the dreams that come out of it.

Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“When one was hurting silently
the other one knew loudly; ” – This is actually very clever and damn accurate. Props for that bit of genius.
The write itself is brutally honest and centered once for heart and once for the head. This is why I search your writes out, for the skill. Awesome write, Rob.

diolch H. when a kind soul such as yourself emotionally responds to my tatty words, it makes it worthwhile. eerie touched your heart, that is all we can ask in this trapeze and circus we call life. x

Some takes flight and others do die. Very interesting poem crimsin;)

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love this poem.. it’s elegant and sensual !! Well written!

Absolutely loved this! The first stanza especially.

D.

We all figure out eventually who is in charge. Nice one.

Thanks

Amen, Thomas. Powerfully penned an excellent and relatable write my friend. I’ve come to that same conclusion myself. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you. Much appreciated.

Thank you.

Wow! The depth and wisdom in this is the stuff only experience teaches and the veteran of that teaching can speak. Much respect

Thank you, Willow.