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    awaken child of the dawn

    meditating in the energy I secret my deepest feelingsallowing them to rise as incencehigh and higher into the heavenswhere they are understoodwith vibrations of recognitionI'm remembered fondlysacred art of the wayto sing in poetryit is the language of the...

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    Disbelief

    If variety is the spice of life my sobriety is equivalent to rolling seven on a cubic diceStanding tall like united lice on laboratory prisoned mice will sooth the soul and mute the sighsGoodbyes are poor receptions in disguiseWicked...

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    • I love the this. This had me swaying and relating to the words. I agree keep these coming.

    • Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics as always my friend. Your flow and wordplay are simply amazing. Love the reggae vibe it accompanied your words smoothly. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you so much Gus! 🙏

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    Ode to a Rat

    I killed a rat not happy about that,but what other choice did I have?It wouldn't just leave of its own accord.It had found a nice cosy place in my home,a place to set up house and breed.I'm sorry your life...

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    • It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.

    • Thanks Fia for reading.
      I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
      🙏

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    big wheel

    escalating in the feelingmy thoughts sky scrapedreaming of days in the sunworried about the future not reallyworry gets you nothing but more dramainstinct and faith in something bigger than you is vitalwe are powerful beings changing things up just...

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    • This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:

      This photo’s truly showing
      What I always knowed*
      Parking on the sidewalk is
      How to define off road

      So rope in a big wheel
      and you’ll be certain of
      One big wheel will be enough
      If you want lasting love

      Clumsy? Yes!
      But so what!
      There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…

      *Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
      Warm greetings, Gus

      • lol I love your offbeat poem I’ve never really been one for money but if I can make some from my artistic edeavors who knows thank Gus ❤️

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    Chemo Dreams and the Axe Within

    In the cancer year  I bled like a thief,  postmortem without a corpse    The night she lost her hair  tears of piers across the valleys  crying for the days which will be no more,  one bridge way too far    When one was hurting silently  the other one knew loudly;  the afternoon deputy cancer-bastard pulled   the shotgun...

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    • I cannot imagine the pain and the dreams that come out of it.

    • Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Dear R,

      This years at my heart strings. Makes me think of Eerie. And my heart bleeds. This piece is so strong it has its own pulse. H 🌷

      • diolch H. when a kind soul such as yourself emotionally responds to my tatty words, it makes it worthwhile. eerie touched your heart, that is all we can ask in this trapeze and circus we call life. x

    • “When one was hurting silently
      the other one knew loudly; ” – This is actually very clever and damn accurate. Props for that bit of genius.
      The write itself is brutally honest and centered once for heart and once for the head. This is why I search your writes out, for the skill. Awesome write, Rob.

      • you are not exactly bereft of writing skills yourself my friend. far from it.

        that’s twice cancer has sliced my heart. moving on with so much love delivered to my spine.

        thanks too for the ‘comments’ insight.

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