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Read MoreThe efficiency room days werethe worst and the best.Broke and bent,sick and deranged.Disheveled dreams, likehorses with broken legs.There was an occasionalmiracle.A forgotten five-dollarbill crumpled in thefront pocket of some dirtyjeans, lying by the fakeplant and a copy of Hamsun'sHunger,...
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Thank you, Tim. I appreciate it.
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Thank you so much.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. I felt these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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That was one helluva journey
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Yes it was. Thank you.
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the innocent way her body grooves
she’s a hurricane burning radioactiveAh yes, the wicked women all men must watch out for. I’ve seen her and avoided the web though it was hard being they usually look so good and irresistible. Men’s will must be strong.
I like the entire thing and its message. I’d love to hear the music to it. It makes me ponder all the great bands out there that will probably never be heard.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Those lines are 100% mine. They are hard to stay away from, that’s it in a nutshell. There are so many great musicians out there, some bands even have followings, though they never got a record deal. It wasn’t wasted music some people loved it, that is making it in a way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m a sucker for awesome lyrics, and these hit like a radioactive hurricane! Heheh
Great tempo with lots of energy!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my lines. lol. It’s nice to see you, hope all is well in your life. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I love this rhythm and flow LOL Don’t turn your back on her indeed.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I think that line was mine, it could have been, Joey’s. The verses are where I’m definite. lol. I was tired of these words sitting on a hard drive, so I did something about it. lol. A wise friend of mine once said “Work is meant to be shared, to be read and heard.” I might have paraphrased a bit. lol. Thank you, Fia. I think your influence has made me see that clearly. Always learning, I am. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well done Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Good to see you, and was also nice to get read some of your work again. Hope all is going well my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“she’s got eyes that mystify
makes you wanna take a chance
she’s the spider, yeah you’re the fly
caught up in a web of circumstance…”I’m totally feeling those lines right there. I will say, I’ve known a few dudes like this…might have dated a couple. This is a killer song, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Unfortunately, I’m unable to talk about the song for a moment. But it will be resolved. Appreciate you.
Damian
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….😞
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Read MoreIf I don't buy you roses If I don't buy you roses Don't bother asking whyTheir life spans but a momentCompared to you and I. Their petal's scented pleasuresMay soothe a troubled soulYet what you've done for me loveso few have...
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Two incredible poems my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian. 🙂
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That first stanza hit. I love flowers but they die, and I feel bad to see them go. Beautifully written.
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Thanks for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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Beautiful work, Tim. Powerhouse.
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Thank you Thomas. 🙂
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Read MoreOnly in candlelight can I see you. Only then can I lay eyes on your perfect form. Only then can the glinting emeralds in your eyes cast their spell on me. Only by the candle flame can I hear...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic!
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There’s a spiritual side to this I think you caught. Really creative writing here. Nice job!
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Das ist wirklich ein Meisterwerk, Daniel!
Like Tim, I appreciate the spiritual side of your writing. I understand the candlelight as a metaphor for our own inner light. The light in our hearts allows us to see other persons like they really are, beyond their appearance, social roles or status symbols. Brilliant!-
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Ein Meisterwerk? Awww, ich danke dir so sehr, Elke! Warten Sie bis zu diesem Wochenende, Sie werden in der Tat das Eröffnungskapitel zu einem Meisterwerk haben. Dass ich posten werde. Und dieses Gedicht hat mit den beiden Charakteren dieser Geschichte zu tun.
Thank you so much, Elke!Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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I had a taste of this life. I know of the family vibe and I too lost some friends. I’m glad it’s all over, but I still have friends lost in that world.
Good one, Thomas.