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Read MoreHow can I miss you? When you never go away Water’s wet sky is blue Perpetual victim falls prey Outside in the distance A stranger lies in wait Steeped in persistence Always guarding the gate When did I get wise? Is the proper question As soon as a crow...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha great end there, friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreits just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is Until it isn't.
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Who decides when it isn’t? Is there a voting process? Or do we just say screw it & flip the status quo? I like the powerful simplicity of this one
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Thanks for reading.
It’s more about accepting the present moment.
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I tend to say that when I see that there is no other way. Nicely done.
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I thought I was you were going in to a Bruce Hornsby song ” That’s just the way it is. Some things will never change. That’s just the way it is. But don’t you believe them”.
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Thanks Fia and Alexandria for reading and taking time to comment.
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Read Moredreamy thoughts with visions of sadnesswatching her before medancing in the wind wild hair flowingwith delicate shades of blue she exudesgentle with my feelingsshe comes to visit oftentender girl with a soft voicemelanchly haunt a little slip of a...
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Broken childhoods can still turn into beautiful things. The Japanese call it the art of kintsugi 🌼
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hello dearest Joe yes they can I don’t feel sadness is my enemy but teacher thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here 💕
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Clever word play. I especially like the transition:
“In moon river dreams, my limbs drifted
from pillow to ache within the attic”Excellent write.
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Thank you Joe. Isn’t it beautiful how music connects the world? Were all looking at the same moon river
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What a well done, strong write. Poetry is so broad, so I look for what moves me, and makes me nod, with approval.
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Appreciate the continued support Styx. I just enjoy grappling with words and metaphors.
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Cleverly penned, Ghosteen. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the kind words Damian
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Dear D,
You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
Wonderful write. H🌷