-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Drieks wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreHow did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...
19 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
Just wonderful:)-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much for your kind words!
If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that. -
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
❤️
-
![Profile picture of I_IS_ ME]()
We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much for the kind words!
-
-
![Profile picture of RPM]()
Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
-
-
![Profile picture of FlatDaddy]()
Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
-
![Profile picture of FlatDaddy]()
Absolutely.
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreFour walls, padded confinement loud music bouncing hard Fueled by teenage angst along candle lit passages Shadows occupy every corner residual beasts traveling Feasting on innocent vibes until they consume the room Tending to my spiritual garden watering this depressing weed The fruits are rotting fast rooted in mindless envy Unable...
12 Comments-
![Profile picture of Detritus]()
Right on, man. Such an inspiring write! Addiction is very much like a ghost, haunting each moment of our lives. I am so happy you were able to push through and maintain. If you ever had any doubt, this poem is proof, that you absolutely do not need alcohol to conjure beauty and meaning on the page.
The last two lines in the third octet scream truth in my mind. Very, very wise.
Clay
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve found out I never needed alcohol to write, it was the addiction that had planted that seed of doubt in my head. It is a ghost always lurking in the shadows, though I’ve always seen it as a personal demon waiting to pounce. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Stay true to yourself and keep on pushing forward. Rock on dude!! Great piece of poetry
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Always, brother.
Appreciate you.Damian
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
I love the honesty in this. What a purge of the soul amigo!
This has so much in it. It had its own evolution.
Just terrific!-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
That’s poetry for ya folks .. Bloomin brill my friend .. Neville 😎👍
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
“My pen became a sword
poetry served as pseudo armor”Amazing how many of us are among this army. Accepting help is so hard. Especially if you’ve rarely been offered a hand. And we’re all kinda programmed to ‘suck it up’…like being human is a weakness. Stripped raw & flushing the wounds here, brutal honesty at its finest, my friend
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love those lines as well. We are programmed that way, and it makes it difficult to rewire the mind. It’s still a work in progress, but it gets a little easier each passing day. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
-
![Profile picture of RomaJ]()
This poem is raw, honest, and deeply moving. Knowing you wrote it just months into your sobriety makes it even more powerful –your pen becomes both sword and shield, guiding you from darkness to hope. A beautiful testament to resilience and the strength of new beginnings.
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was cold turkey, and past overdue. Although it was my fourth attempt at getting sober, the third time was not a charm. lol. Thank you for your continued support, and wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
I relate to this. Lots of craziness in the world
I hate going out after dark so I don’t unless it’s absolutely necessary and not by myself
Powerful write -
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
My current apartment in the ghetto in Buffalo, NY is safer with my living alone – than any place I lived with family. Neighbors keep an appropriate distance BUT A WATCHFUL EYE! Community is sometimes safer than family.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Phenomenally penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously my friend my writing isn’t everyones cup of tea but you make me feel cared for thank you ❤️
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreWith too much painful eye strain and too much social mediaI'm taking a break from both to touch grass, as they say.I apologize for any reviews I'm missing. See you when I return. 🙂
10 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Enjoy the grass;))
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks Fia.
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Don’t forget to smell the flowers!!
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
I’ll try not to. 😉
-
-
![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
Ground yourself, let nature speak to you and come back with a free mind and lots of inspirations!
All the best, Tim, hope to see you soon! 🌳-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thank you, Elke. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Christine Shaw (Chris)]()
Have a good break Tim. Come back refreshed.
Chris
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks Chris.
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Take care, Tim. Recharge the batteries my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
I appreciate the comment, Damian.
-
-
- Load More Posts
Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian