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hello dearest Jim thank you for reading and commenting it’s just Halloween fun ❤️
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I love all sorts of fun. ❤❤❤💖💖
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Ooo the reaper. This is menacing.
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hello beautiful Fia thank you and I was able to get to them ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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helllo dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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This is mysteriously dark. It captures the power of the night.
Regards
james-
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hello dearest James this is a funny thing I do…this write is me talking to the powers that be writing down what they say and then my answer thank you for the love here ❤️
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Seductively dark, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian I deeply appreciiate your thoughts ❤️
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Hoi hoi
If I am listening well, I hear confirming hums…
If I am seeing well, I see all thumbs up from the fan-club…Who am I to disagree? Most likely I’m part of the fan club.
Kind regards, Gus-
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hello dearest Gus good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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Awesome writing, dear Crimsin! Tender and seductive as well as haunting from the depth of the abyss!
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hi Elke good afternoon thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Complexity of desire. It’s ever so. 🖤
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hello Dearest Jim thank you for getting me desire can come from the strangest of places deep within us ❤️
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Glad to have gotten it. I hope I get more too. 😉
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I love it!! Wonderfully constructed and passionately HOT!!
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hello dearest Keith good afternoon thank you my dear friend for the love ❤️
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Read MoreThe wind, a phantom legion, howled its ancient song, Through skeletal branches, where dead leaves clung. A tempest brewed, a symphony of dread, whispering secrets of the long since dead, The house, a wounded beast, with shutters torn and weak,...
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This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌
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hello beautiful Willow good afternoon thank you graciously for the love on this we both appreciate it deeply ❤️
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
GOODNESS, TFT!
Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
See critique and edits below:I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
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V3L4 should be: What’s next, a ballad? Maybe, one or two.
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much appreciated. good luck convincin me to use punctuation 😉
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Now, Syr Bard
Post it so everyone can enjoy your amazing flexibility and creativity with a poet’s pen.
I’ll be first in line to review it for you! ⁓ Richard
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So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.
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good mornig dearest Keith I’m happy you liked it I was worried I went too far but I never worried about that before why start now right? thank you my friend ❤️
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Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I think I’m safe from deathorse for now. You also seem to be safe, given your lack of innocence.
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