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Thank you so much. I’m glad somebody thinks so. 🙂 I don’t consider myself a proper writer, and am always pleasantly surprised when words arrange themselves nicely for me. I assume each poem is going to be my last!
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hello beautiful Ellie it does hang heavy doesn’t it this is great 💕
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Thank you. Yep – waaaay too much. I have a long fuse and am very resilient, but went past my limits a couple of weeks ago.
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Powerfully penned, Ellie. Emotion can sometimes be complicated, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you too.
Still pondering on what I’m going to do about it.
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Hello, Ellie. I’m one that can heavily relate to this piece of yours. Emotional trauma lingers no matter how much treatment we seek. It will explode, as you put it, either through tears or rage… the latter hopefully not. We poets can write limitlessly about trauma. Excellent write, Ellie!
Daniel
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We have had enough for a whole lifetime, so far in 2025. Yet the punches keep on coming. It’s a calm-ish week, but I’m sinking at the moment.
I’ve been with my husband for 30 years, and he told me the other day that he has never seen me lose my temper. So it won’t be rage, anyway!
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hello lovely Fia a very fiery passion powerful 💕
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Thank you crimsin ❣️
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Oh damn…
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Thank you, Willow❣️
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write is fire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I need to get this fire started somehow. Lol
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I do this to women …
Then they burn for me
Wait
Listen
I may be at your door ….-
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Ohh, waiting.
Big like
Thank you PoetSpeak ❣️
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The flames of that passionate fire are rising high in this one, Fia. Nice one.
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Thank you, Tim had to bring a little fire❣️
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Do you see me leaning in? This poem has made me a voyeur. Very nice, Fia, love it.
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Thank you Kay-1😊
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Brenda, this is breathtakingly beautiful 🧡
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hello Willow thank you graciously this is for a friend who was in my day to day just pure magic I don’t get to see her everyday now but I wanted her to know how much I missed her…she is kind of a gypsy though we stay in touch on FB… I’m happy you liked this 💕
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This melodic music and words are beautiful
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hello lovely Fia I hope you’re having a great afternoon thank you graciously this lady is now of a kind…you are too I can tell beautiful 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you deeply 💕
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hello dearest Steven thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment and for seeing my poetry though dark part of the heavenly realms it’s deeply appreciated 💕💕
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Read MoreReading the room reveals a clue It takes concentration to observe Ghosts of the past in the rearview Another deadman found his nerve Once inside it’s difficult to leave Too many loose ends unravel lies Can’t get dirty and remain naive Tactical spider still collecting flies Planting...
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I think about the consequences of opening my mouth & weigh them against the burden of saying nothing. If it has the potential to hurt someone, I keep it locked in the Nope folder. There’s a lot of insight in this one. That cautionary note…think before you speak…is never out of date, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always try to think before I speak. Sometimes that means biting my tongue, I like to choose the hills I’m willing to die on. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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No you can not stay naive. Especially when you already was a part of it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly, also can’t play the victim when found at the scene of the crime. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian you are very deep… I’ve picked up on a lot of wisdom in you… the air can help but be heavy with the words… truth is just like that 💕well done…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, that means a lot to me, such a wonderful compliment. It’s really just being true to how my brain is wired. I’m a deep thinker who likes puzzles. lol. Your support has meant a lot as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Learning to “read the room” is such a great line, and your last is filled with wisdom. We live and we learn as we go learning from our past mistakes and learning from others.
Great poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a cool line. Wisdom is gained over time, I totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is a beautiful poetic eulogy, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously he will be missed I only saw him in concert once I was in the second row center and he aimed his foam gun on me and I ducked behind my husband he seemed to get a kick out of it…I thought the prince of darkness should be remembered here,,. thank you for the love on this write 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. What a nice tribute to, Ozzy, my friend. Really love the use of song titles, this is an amazing write. He was one of a kind, and his music will live forever. Losing the artists that were part of my life’s soundtrack is very sad indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I’m so happy this resonated with you he truly was and is one of a kind 💕
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Legend
BIG
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hello dearest Poet good morning yes he was thank you graciously for the love on this 💕
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Black Sabbath were pioneers and the reason heavy metal exists. Ozzy has so many good songs in his solo archives. He will be missed by millions. Nice tribute. He did indeed give us his blood and love.
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hello dearest Tim indeed they were at the time there was no one like them and neither will there ever be again he will be missed thank you for helping me remember him 💕
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