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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Read MoreWhen a calm sky turns grey And a whispered wind cuts When the peace you need to stay But vanishes like dust Every beauty on a rose Is kissed with lust The roots never grow Past the decayed crust Word sung in a resounding hymn Played with notes Eco'd...
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![Profile picture of Sam Nash]()
OMG…. This is one of your very very best
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Sam😊
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
This is an amazing poem, dear Fía!
Abracadabra: As I speak I create!-
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Thank you Sappho.😊
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![Profile picture of Detritus]()
Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.
Clay
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Thank you,Clay 😊
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![Profile picture of Cipher]()
Nicely done Fia…
Powerful excursion…
<#3 Cipher
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Cipher 😊
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.
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Thank you, Jim😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you ,Damian ☺️
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow
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Thank you, Willow;))
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.
Wonderful ink.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Nick. I love Poe’s work
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![Profile picture of Neville]()
Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Oh! This is very good, Brenda.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning dearest Adagio thank you graciously 💕
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞-
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what a beautifully sexy comment thank you graciously Jim 💕
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I love that you think so – “..beautifully sexy…” mmm
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful. You paint this scene well.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.
John
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜